{"id":3258,"date":"2023-09-14T23:19:59","date_gmt":"2023-09-14T15:19:59","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.editage.cn\/sci-writing\/?p=3258"},"modified":"2023-11-23T15:53:50","modified_gmt":"2023-11-23T07:53:50","slug":"%e8%ae%ba%e6%96%87%e5%86%99%e8%b6%85%e4%ba%86%e6%80%8e%e4%b9%88%e5%8a%9e%ef%bc%9f%e8%bf%99%e9%87%8c%e6%9c%89%e5%87%8f%e5%ad%97%e6%95%b0%e6%96%b9%e6%b3%95%e5%8d%81%e5%88%99","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.editage.cn\/sci-writing\/3258\/","title":{"rendered":"\u8bba\u6587\u5199\u8d85\u4e86\u600e\u4e48\u529e\uff1f\u8fd9\u91cc\u6709\u51cf\u5b57\u6570\u65b9\u6cd5\u5341\u5219"},"content":{"rendered":"

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\u793a\u4f8b<\/span><\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n

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\u793a\u4f8b<\/span><\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n

\u539f\u6587\uff1aThe samples were analyzed on the ABC spectrophotometer (Zhejiang Scientific, Zhejiang, China) to determine the xyz values.(17 \u5b57)\u3002<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n

\u4fee\u6539\u540e\uff1aThe samples were analyzed on the ABC spectrophotometer to determine the xyz values (ABC spectrometer; Zhejiang Scientific, Zhejiang, China).(15 \u5b57)\u3002<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n

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\u793a\u4f8b<\/span><\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n

\u539f\u6587\uff1aA diagnosis of cancer was made on the basis of the findings.(12 \u5b57)\u3002<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n

\u4fee\u6539\u540e\uff1aA diagnosis of cCancer was diagnosedmade on the basis of the findings.(9 \u5b57)\u3002<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n

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\u793a\u4f8b<\/span><\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n

\u539f\u6587\uff1aThe protein level was 5 mg in Group A, while it was 3 mg in Group B, the difference being statistically significant (p < 0.05).(25 \u5b57)\u3002<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n

\u4fee\u6539\u540e\uff1aThe difference in the protein level was 5 mg in between Ggroups A and B, while it was 3 mg in Group b, the difference being statistically was significant (5 mg vs. 3 mg, p < 0.05).(21 \u5b57)\u3002<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n

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as a result – therefore<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n

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as a consequence of – owing to<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n

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\u793a\u4f8b<\/span><\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n

\u539f\u6587\uff1aGroup A was given cyclosporine, Group B was given FK506, and Group C was given chlorambucil.(16 \u5b57)\u3002<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n

\u4fee\u6539\u540e\uff1aGroup A was given cyclosporine; Group B, was given FK506; and Group C, was given chlorambucil.(12 \u5b57)\u3002<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n

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\u793a\u4f8b<\/span><\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n

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\u4fee\u6539\u540e\uff1aAfter rehabilitation, the patients became self-reliantto rely on themselves.(6 \u5b57)\u3002<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n

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\u793a\u4f8b<\/span><\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n

\u539f\u6587\uff1aWritten informed consent was given by all patients.(8 \u5b57)\u3002<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n

\u4fee\u6539\u540e\uff1aAll patients gave Wwritten informed consent was given by all patients.(6 \u5b57)\u3002<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n

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\u793a\u4f8b<\/span><\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n

\u539f\u6587\uff1aPatients of Group 1 were followed up for 6 months, and those of Group 2, for 12 months.(18 \u5b57)\u3002<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n

\u4fee\u6539\u540e\uff1aPatients of Group 1 patients were followed up for 6 months, whileand those of Group 2 patientswere followed up, for 12 months.(15 \u5b57)\u3002<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n

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