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How to write an effective title and abstract and choose appropriate keywords
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More often than not, when researchers set about writing a paper, they spend the most time on the "meat" of the article (the methods, results, and discussion sections). Little thought goes into the title and abstract, while keywords get even lesser attention, often being typed out on-the-spot in a journal’s submission system. Ironically, these three elements—the title, abstract, and keywords—may well hold the key to publication success.
The title, abstract, and keywords: Why it is important to get them right
The title, abstract, and keywords play a pivotal role in the communication of research. Without them, most papers may never be read or even found by interested readers1-4. Here’s why:
Writing the title
Journal websites and search engines will use the words in your title to categorize and display your article to interested readers, while readers will use your title as the first step to determining whether or not to read your article. This is why a good title (typically 10–12 words long)6,7 will use descriptive terms and phrases that accurately highlight the core content of the paper (e.g., the species studied, the literary work evaluated, or the technology discussed).1,5
Here are some steps (with examples) you can follow to write an effective title:
The title, abstract, and keywords: Why it is important to get them right
The title, abstract, and keywords play a pivotal role in the communication of research. Without them, most papers may never be read or even found by interested readers1-4. Here’s why:
- Most electronic search engines, databases, or journal websites will use the words found in your title and abstract, and your list of keywords to decide whether and when to display your paper to interested readers.1,2,5-8Thus, these 3 elements enable the dissemination of your research; without them, readers would not be able to find or cite your paper.
- The title and abstract are often the only parts of a paper that are freely available online.1,9 Hence, once readers find your paper, they will read through the title and abstract to determine whether or not to purchase a full copy of your paper/continue reading.2-4
- Finally, the abstract is the first section of your paper that journal editors and reviewers read. While busy journal editors may use the abstract to decide whether to send a paper for peer review or reject it outright, reviewers will form their first impression about your paper on reading it.10
Writing the title
Journal websites and search engines will use the words in your title to categorize and display your article to interested readers, while readers will use your title as the first step to determining whether or not to read your article. This is why a good title (typically 10–12 words long)6,7 will use descriptive terms and phrases that accurately highlight the core content of the paper (e.g., the species studied, the literary work evaluated, or the technology discussed).1,5
Here are some steps (with examples) you can follow to write an effective title:
- Answer the questions: What is my paper about? What techniques/ designs were used? Who/what is studied? What were the results?
- My paper studies whether X therapy improves the cognitive function of patients suffering from dementia.
- It was a randomized trial.
- I studied 40 cases from six cities in Japan.
- There was an improvement in the cognitive function of patients.
- Use your answers to list key words.
- X therapy
- Randomized trial
- Dementia
- 6 Japanese cities
- 40 cases
- Improved cognitive function
- Build a sentence with these key words.
This study is a randomized trial that investigates whether X therapy improved cognitive function in 40 dementia patients from 6 cities in Japan; it reports improved cognitive function. (28 words) - Delete all waste words (e.g., study of, investigates) and repetitive words; link the remaining.
This study is arandomized trialthat investigates whetherX therapy improved cognitive function in 40 dementia patients from 6 cities in Japan;it reports improved cognitive function
Randomized trial of X therapy for improving cognitive function in 40 dementia patients from 6 cities in Japan (18 words) - Delete non-essential information and reword.
Randomized trial of X therapy for improving cognitive function in 40 dementia patientsfrom 6 cities in Japan reports improved cognitive function
Randomized trial of X therapy for improving cognitive function in 40 dementia patients (13 words)
OR (reworded with subtitle and a focus on the results)
X therapy improves cognitive function in 40 dementia patients: A randomized trial (12 words)
Writing the abstract
The abstract should work like a marketing tool.4,11It should help the reader decide “whether there is something in the body of the paper worth reading”10by providing a quick and accurate summary of the entire paper,2,3 explaining why the research was conducted, what the aims were, how these were met, and what the main findings were.1,2,6-8,12
Types of abstracts
Generally between 100 and 300 words in length,1,3,4,12abstracts are of different types: descriptive, informative, and structured.
The abstract should work like a marketing tool.4,11It should help the reader decide “whether there is something in the body of the paper worth reading”10by providing a quick and accurate summary of the entire paper,2,3 explaining why the research was conducted, what the aims were, how these were met, and what the main findings were.1,2,6-8,12
Types of abstracts
Generally between 100 and 300 words in length,1,3,4,12abstracts are of different types: descriptive, informative, and structured.
- Descriptive abstracts,usually used in the social sciences and humanities,do not give specific information about methods and results.13,14
- Informative abstractsare commonly used in the sciences and present information on the background, aim, methods, results, and conclusions.13,14
- Structured abstracts are essentially informative abstracts divided into a series of headings (e.g., Objective, Method, Results, Conclusion)9,15,16and are typically found in medical literature and clinicaltrial reports.
- Begin writing the abstract after you have finished writing your paper.
- First answer the questions “What problem are you trying to solve?” and “What motivated you to do so?” by picking out the major objectives/hypotheses and conclusions from your Introduction and Conclusion sections.
- Next, answer the question "How did you go about achieving your objective?" by selecting key sentences and phrases from your Methods section.
- Now, reveal your findings by listing the major results from your Results section.
- Finally, answer the question "What are the implications of your findings?"
- Arrange the sentences and phrases selected in steps 2, 3, 4, and 5 into a single paragraph in the following sequence: Introduction, Methods, Results, and Conclusions.
- Make sure that this paragraph is self-contained1,2,7,12 and does not include the following:1-3,7,12
- Information not present in the paper
- Figures and tables
- Abbreviations
- Literature review or reference citations
- Now, link your sentences.
- Ensure that the paragraph is written in the past tense1,7,17 and check that the information flows well, preferably in the following order: purpose, basic study design/techniques used, major findings, conclusions, and implications.
- Check that the final abstract
- Contains information that is consistent with that presented in the paper.
- Meets the guidelines of the targeted journal (word limit, type of abstract, etc.)
- Does not contain typographical errors as these may lead referees and editors to “conclude that the paper is bad and should be rejected.”10
Choosing your keywords
Journals, search engines, and indexing and abstracting services classify papers using keywords.2,4,5,7 Thus, an accurate list of keywords will ensure correct indexingand help showcase your research to interested groups.2 This in turn will increase the chances of your paper being cited.3
Here’s how you can go about choosing the right keywords for your paper:3,5,7,18
While it may be challenging to write effective titles and abstracts and to chooseappropriate keywords, there is no denying the fact that it is definitelyworth putting in extra time to get these right. After all, these 3 smallest segments of your paper have the potential to significantly impact your chances of getting published, read, and cited.
Journals, search engines, and indexing and abstracting services classify papers using keywords.2,4,5,7 Thus, an accurate list of keywords will ensure correct indexingand help showcase your research to interested groups.2 This in turn will increase the chances of your paper being cited.3
Here’s how you can go about choosing the right keywords for your paper:3,5,7,18
- Read through your paper and list down the terms/phrases that are used repeatedly in the text.
- Ensure that this list includes all your main key terms/phrases and a few additional key phrases.
- Include variants of a term/phrase (e.g., kidney and renal), drug names, procedures, etc.
- Include common abbreviations of terms (e.g., HIV).
- Now, refer to a common vocabulary/term list or indexing standard in your discipline (e.g., GeoRef, ERIC Thesaurus, PsycInfo, ChemWeb, BIOSIS Search Guide, MeSH Thesaurus) and ensure that the terms you have used match those used in these resources.
- Finally, before you submit your article, type your keywords into a search engine and check if the results that show up match the subject of your paper. This will help you determine whether your keywords are appropriate for the topic of your paper.
While it may be challenging to write effective titles and abstracts and to chooseappropriate keywords, there is no denying the fact that it is definitelyworth putting in extra time to get these right. After all, these 3 smallest segments of your paper have the potential to significantly impact your chances of getting published, read, and cited.
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